Discipline
I realize now that I have no discipline. Which is why I depend on my friend Oliver for challenges. So he talked about mystery, and I wrote it. He also is writing a poem a day in August, and while I'm nowhere near that, I'm up to 2 for the month, which is 2 more than the rest of the year, so here's the first draft:
Mystery Is
The moment a baby is lifted out of a belly
and follows silence with a cry
The measure between lovers
on nights they do not touch
The way thorns grow on roses
How a dog is compelled to eat
those things that will surely kill it
A toddler’s anguish with language
and its inability to speak without her
An hour of thunder without rain
when rain is the object of desire
A thousand branches growing
where there is no longer a tree
Penguins that molt for winter
but do not believe in darkness
and, after all, every morning’s
inevitable rise of light.
Mystery Is
The moment a baby is lifted out of a belly
and follows silence with a cry
The measure between lovers
on nights they do not touch
The way thorns grow on roses
How a dog is compelled to eat
those things that will surely kill it
A toddler’s anguish with language
and its inability to speak without her
An hour of thunder without rain
when rain is the object of desire
A thousand branches growing
where there is no longer a tree
Penguins that molt for winter
but do not believe in darkness
and, after all, every morning’s
inevitable rise of light.
39 Comments:
Oh, I love it, Sue!
Kick ass: "How a dog is compelled to eat/those things that will surely kill it" and "An hour of thunder without rain/when rain is the object of desire" Finely crafted argument here, how the lines build up to a summation.
Keep going!
h7hE4b Very good blog! Thanks!
yOdRVC actually, that's brilliant. Thank you. I'm going to pass that on to a couple of people.
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